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PostSubject: Ethan/Edon   Fri Mar 14, 2014 2:03 am

Your name: Ethan Ston

Your age: 18

Your gender: male

Your timezone: (the timezone you are in) Europian time zone

Your location: (country you live in) United Kingdom

Name: When I'm in human world, Ethan. But all demons and whiches know me as Edon

Group: Demon

Power: Projection- I have it now.
Spell casting- I can cast spells now
Memory Manipulation- I can maipulat ememory now
Manifestion: I can come as a ghost later

Age: From creating of world!

Personality: Bitchy. He likes to kill whenever he can! He rarely support the Source! He likes to seduce whitches. He's bisexual!

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(His human form)-(Logan Lerman)


(His demon form. Took from Charmed anime)

History: He has no parents! He just appired when world was created! At first he was good. He was angel, but when he insolted his master, he took his wings, and powers. He got so made, that he went to the underworld and asked to become demon. Demon God heard him and made his wish come true. He spend time in human world. One night he killed a guy. Witch's son! She cursed him that he can take his demonic form, only on full moon. And since then, he's trying to find spell that can change curse. He killes by sucking life energy from victim. He wanted to concour the world. He married a witch, Halliwell witch, and they got a child. Melissa trowed the baby and Edon out and locked them in the underworld, but they managed to escape. He killed the baby and took her powers. From then he hates Halliwell's!

Rp Sample: Killing!
Full Moon shined on him, as he started to turn to a demon. Thing he wants to be. Women was screaming in front of him.  He laughed. Demon projected chains around woman. She was crying. Her blue eyes were shining becouse of tears. He took her in to his arms and started to fly. They went to Mount Everest.
"Please don't kill me!" Women yelled.
"Oh, it wont hurt Honey! I will do it quickly." He continued to laugh as he projected a condom in his hand.
"NOOOOOOOOO!" Women yelled.
He started to rip close from her. She was naked minute after that. Edon turned in his human form, and raped her.
He cast a spell on her to fall a sleep. During the sex, he killed her. And took her neckles. There was something writen on it.
From grany to Emily <3

He smiled like he defeated some demon that challeng him. He turn to demon, and fly away!

(It's just a little I can do from Rp-ing! Hope you liked it)


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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Fri Mar 14, 2014 3:21 am

Welcome to the site Very Happy.
What is the name of the actor you are using since he looks a bit like Cole Jr his face claim Very Happy.

Greetz Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Fri Mar 14, 2014 3:50 am

Thanks! I don't know the name. I googled pictures Razz Is that a problem?

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Fri Mar 14, 2014 7:10 am

Just read over your character bio. I know you just came on, but I have an idea of including your character with mine (Remy). Would you be interested ? Very Happy You can PM me or we can chat about it in the chat box at the bottom of the home page.
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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Fri Mar 14, 2014 9:37 pm

Thanks! Is my character approved? I cant wait to play here!

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:56 am

Payson, I am intrested. I PM-ed you! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Mon Mar 17, 2014 8:02 am

No not yet approved :d.
I really would need a face claim Very Happy, try to google those pictures again and try to find out who he is Very Happy.
Second try to explain your powers better Very Happy.
Third a longer history would be nice aswell, maby the he was created when the world started is a bit too far? try to make up a nice history Very Happy.
Last but not least you have many spelling errors, so read trough it again and try to improve your speling Very Happy.
I know it is a lot but these things really need to happen before i can appprove. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:40 am

I did it!

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:48 am

I did it!

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:51 am

You didn't really followd what Kevin had said. Explain to us how he was born into the world, without parents. Otherwise make another history without that 'when the world was created'. Also there are still some spelling errors.

This are just a few spelling error mistakes that I have found and put the correct spelling
Becouse -Because (It is with au)
Writen -Written (It is with dubble t)
Grany -Granny (It is with dubble n)

Tip: Work on your syntax, because sometimes it doesn't flow wel.

@Kevin, you have also one spelling error. Heheh!
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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:55 am

Scarlett is right.
Also the info on your powers can be better explained.

(If i make a spelling error then that is because i typ to fast ;-))

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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 3:04 am

In this History off yours I have found syntax that doesnt flow wel! Read it again, you will find out were the mistakes are.

History: He has no parents! He just appired when world was created! At first he was good. He was angel, but when he insolted his master, he took his wings, and powers. (WHy did his master took his wings and powers? Only because he insolted him? 'Feel little bit unrealistic to me') He got so made, that he went to the underworld and asked to become demon.
Demon God heard him and made his wish come true.(Why did the demon God made his wish to become a demon?) He spend time in human world. (Why was he in the human world, why did he spend time there) One night he killed a guy. Witch's son! (Why did he killed a guy, the wiches's son?) She cursed him that he can take his demonic form, only on full moon. And since then, he's trying to find spell that can change curse. He killes by sucking life energy from victim. He wanted to concour the world. He married a witch, Halliwell witch, and they got a child. (Why did he married a Halliwel witch? 'This seems not right because he was cursed by a witch') Melissa trowed the baby and Edon out and locked them in the underworld,  (Why did Melissa throw the baby and Edon out and locked them in the underworld?) but they managed to escape. (How did the baby and Edon escape from the underworld) He killed the baby and took her powers. From then he hates Halliwell's! (Why did he hate the Halliwels? 'Only because his love threw him out? There must be more then that?')

What I have said between () are questions you must answer yourself, to make a good history. What I have said is between ' '.

@Kevin, I know. I have the same problem as yours!
Do you agree what I just have said, what is written above your name '@Kevin'
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PostSubject: Re: Ethan/Edon   Tue Mar 18, 2014 4:20 pm

I am a Historian. Your Bio most definitely needs work. Everything has a beginning. Declaring yourself to be the first demon, that is completely inaccurate. Aramaic and Hebrew Lore Determine the First Demon to be Lilith, created by El, she ended up killing the first Adam. Japanese Lore says that the Creators of the World were both Demons.

Charmed also has Lore that needs to be taken into account.

Please do some Legwork when doing some research. If you need some help, please ask. I am more than willing to help you. Research is what I do. I enjoy it. For me, it is fun.

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